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Message de kiraln posté le 26-10-2016 à 13:55:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ce petit texte s'il vous plaît
Merci pour vos réponses.
The article is about three successful cartoons for teenagers and young adults. They tell the story of an American family of the working-class, these are a parody of society. There are a lot of profanity, satire and dark humour. Each episode cost up to 2$ millions to produce. Their creators have also won many awards. These series may shock some people, but can do much laughter. Opinions are mixed.
I have watched it yet and I think it's funny, but not suitable for children because it's vulgar and there are a lot of profanity.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-10-2016 16:28
Message de kiraln posté le 26-10-2016 à 13:55:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ce petit texte s'il vous plaît
Merci pour vos réponses.
The article is about three successful cartoons for teenagers and young adults. They tell the story of an American family of the working-class, these are a parody of society. There are a lot of profanity, satire and dark humour. Each episode cost up to 2$ millions to produce. Their creators have also won many awards. These series may shock some people, but can do much laughter. Opinions are mixed.
I have watched it yet and I think it's funny, but not suitable for children because it's vulgar and there are a lot of profanity.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-10-2016 16:28
Réponse : Correction/cartoons de laure95, postée le 26-10-2016 à 14:38:29 (S | E)
Bonjour,
The article is about three successful cartoons for teenagers and young adults. They tell (un article ne raconte pas, une personne oui, chercher la traduction du verbe: "traiter de")the story of an American family of the working-class, these are a parody of society. There are a lot of profanity, satire and dark humour. Each episode cost up (faute de conjugaison) to (pas de besoin de UP et TO)2$ millions to produce. Their creators have also won many awards. These series may shock some people, but can do much laughter (make laugh). Opinions are mixed.
I have watched it yet and I think it's funny, but not suitable for children because it's vulgar and there are (there are + pluriel) a lot of profanity.
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