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Message de emily157 posté le 25-12-2015 à 11:10:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je voulais savoir si quelqu’un pourrait m'aider à corriger ce texte ; je vous remercie d'avance. Passez de bonnes fêtes !
Some important dates about basketball:the first basketball meeting took place in 1891 in the United States in a middle school of Sprinfield.
The first match in Europe took place in 1893 in Paris, France in the Christian University of Young people.
In 1920, basketball became official sport in France.
In 1934, the International Federation of Amateur Basketball was created.
Now we are going to speak of The rules of the basketball
The rules of basketball did not stop evolving further to the technical progress of the players, to the quality of the material
The basketball takes place on a 28-meter-long by 15-meter-wide rectangular ground 7-meter-high ceiling at least . At the beginning, the ground was smaller - 20m by 14m - so corresponding to the dimensions of a gym.
There are two teams of 5 players who will try to score points by throwing the ball into . Each of the players can take place and move where he wants on the ground but it is absolutely forbidden to move with the ball in hand. contacts between players are also not allowed and will be penalized as personal faults.
The game takes place in two halves of 20-minute actual time. The referee blows his whistle to stop the game when time is up. At half-time, there is a break from 10 to 15 min. The trainers of each of the teams can ask for two time-outs of 1 minute by half-time to reorganize the game. They can also ask for the replacement of one or several players during the game.
The value of a successful shooting can vary according to the place of the ground where from it is shot: 3 points beyond the line of 6,25m cost; 2 points below this line and 1 point by free throw.
The meeting begins officially with an intervening period in the central circle. Thereferee throws the ball vertically between two opposite players placed face to face in the central circle, with the back to the basket of their team. Both players cannot retouch the ball second time having jumped.
The team which possesses the ball in 24 seconds to fire in the basket she loses the ball.
The team which has the ball in its refreshed half of the ground of 8 seconds to make her pass in opposite half. The return in its half of the ground is forbidden. Every aggressor in possession of the ball has 5 seconds to make an action of game: pass, dribble or shooting. When a team has the ball, none of his players has to stay more than 3 seconds in the racket
The faults whistled by the arbitrator(referee) are:
It walk: there is one "to walk"when the player makes more than two steps with the ballin hand. In this case, it is the opposite team which receives the ball
Technical fault: there is a " technical fault " when a player or a trainer has an antisports behavior. This fault will be sanctioned by two free throws. After two technical faults of a person, it is the exclusion.
Personal fault: there is " personal fault " when a player affects his opponent. In the fifth personal fault (sixth in NBA), the player is definitively excluded from the part.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2015 22:29
Message de emily157 posté le 25-12-2015 à 11:10:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je voulais savoir si quelqu’un pourrait m'aider à corriger ce texte ; je vous remercie d'avance. Passez de bonnes fêtes !
Some important dates about basketball:the first basketball meeting took place in 1891 in the United States in a middle school of Sprinfield.
The first match in Europe took place in 1893 in Paris, France in the Christian University of Young people.
In 1920, basketball became official sport in France.
In 1934, the International Federation of Amateur Basketball was created.
Now we are going to speak of The rules of the basketball
The rules of basketball did not stop evolving further to the technical progress of the players, to the quality of the material
The basketball takes place on a 28-meter-long by 15-meter-wide rectangular ground 7-meter-high ceiling at least . At the beginning, the ground was smaller - 20m by 14m - so corresponding to the dimensions of a gym.
There are two teams of 5 players who will try to score points by throwing the ball into . Each of the players can take place and move where he wants on the ground but it is absolutely forbidden to move with the ball in hand. contacts between players are also not allowed and will be penalized as personal faults.
The game takes place in two halves of 20-minute actual time. The referee blows his whistle to stop the game when time is up. At half-time, there is a break from 10 to 15 min. The trainers of each of the teams can ask for two time-outs of 1 minute by half-time to reorganize the game. They can also ask for the replacement of one or several players during the game.
The value of a successful shooting can vary according to the place of the ground where from it is shot: 3 points beyond the line of 6,25m cost; 2 points below this line and 1 point by free throw.
The meeting begins officially with an intervening period in the central circle. Thereferee throws the ball vertically between two opposite players placed face to face in the central circle, with the back to the basket of their team. Both players cannot retouch the ball second time having jumped.
The team which possesses the ball in 24 seconds to fire in the basket she loses the ball.
The team which has the ball in its refreshed half of the ground of 8 seconds to make her pass in opposite half. The return in its half of the ground is forbidden. Every aggressor in possession of the ball has 5 seconds to make an action of game: pass, dribble or shooting. When a team has the ball, none of his players has to stay more than 3 seconds in the racket
The faults whistled by the arbitrator(referee) are:
It walk: there is one "to walk"when the player makes more than two steps with the ballin hand. In this case, it is the opposite team which receives the ball
Technical fault: there is a " technical fault " when a player or a trainer has an antisports behavior. This fault will be sanctioned by two free throws. After two technical faults of a person, it is the exclusion.
Personal fault: there is " personal fault " when a player affects his opponent. In the fifth personal fault (sixth in NBA), the player is definitively excluded from the part.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2015 22:29
Réponse: Correction/basketball de here4u, postée le 25-12-2015 à 12:09:04 (S | E)
Hello !
Some important dates about basketball:the first basketball meeting took place in 1891 in the United States in a middle school of Sprinfield.
The first match in Europe took place in 1893 in Paris, France, in the Christian University of Young people.
In 1920, basketball became XX official sport in France.
In 1934, the International Federation of Amateur Basketball was created.
Now we are going to speak of The rules of the basketball
The rules of basketball did not stop evolving further to the technical progress of the players,and to the increasing quality of the material
The basketball takes place on a 28-meter-long by 15-meter-wide rectangular ground 7-meter-high ceiling at least . At the beginning, the ground was smaller - 20m by 14m - so corresponding to the dimensions of a gym.
There are two teams of 5 players who will try to score points by throwing the ball into ???? into what? . Each of the players can take place and move where he wants on the ground (word order)but it is absolutely forbidden to move with the ball in hand. contacts between players are also not allowed and will be penalized as personal faults.
The game takes place in two halves of 20-minute actual time. The referee blows his whistle to stop the game when time is up. At half-time, there is a break from 10 to 15 min. The trainers of each of the teams can ask for two time-outs of 1 minute by half-time to reorganize the game. They can also ask for the replacement of one or several players during the game.
The value of a successful shooting can vary according to the place of the ground where from it is shot: 3 points beyond the line of 6,25m cost; 2 points below this line and 1 point by free throw.
The meeting begins officially with an intervening period in the central circle. The/referee throws the ball vertically between two opposite players placed face to face in the central circle, with the back to the basket of their team. Both players cannot retouch the ball second time having jumped.
The team which possesses the ball in 24 seconds to fire in the basket she loses the ball.(construction à revoir!)
The team which has the ball in its refreshed half of the ground of 8 seconds to make her pass inXXXopposite half. The return in its half of the ground is forbidden. Every aggressor in possession of the ball has 5 seconds to make an action of game: pass, dribble or shooting. When a team has the ball, none of his players has to stay(ce n'est pas le bon modal!) more than 3 seconds in the racket
The faults whistled by the arbitrator(referee) are:
It walk: there is one "to walk"when the player makes more than two steps with the ball/in hand. In this case, it is the opposite team which receives the ball
Technical fault: there is a " technical fault " when a player or a trainer has an antisports behavior. This fault will be sanctioned by two free throws. After two technical faults of a person, it is the exclusion.clumsy!
Personal fault: there is X " personal fault " when a player affects his opponent. In the fifth personal fault (sixth in NBA), the player is definitively excluded from the part.
Réponse: Correction/basketball de lemagemasque, postée le 25-12-2015 à 14:10:06 (S | E)
Hello!
Springfield!
"The team which" est correct.
Si vous êtes toute seule à parler, préférez "I" à "we".
J'arrête là, je renvoie aux corrections faites ici Lien internet
Joyeux Noël !
Réponse: Correction/basketball de here4u, postée le 26-12-2015 à 10:31:39 (S | E)
Hello !
ha ha !
Ca m'amuse de voir que les correcteurs de cet autre site, sans doute peu habitués aux "vrais élèves" 
, sont nettement moins patients que nous ! 
lemasque, 'The team which" est correct si l'on parle de l'entité équipe ... Là, comme elle a le ballon, je préfère penser que ce sont les joueurs ... l'un ou l'autre ... habitue toi au "purisme" tant que tu as des examens à passer ... après, tu feras ce que tu voudras !
Réponse: Correction/basketball de lemagemasque, postée le 26-12-2015 à 14:41:53 (S | E)
Hello!
Oui, le correcteur de ce site corrige les fautes directement !
Pour moi, "the team which has the ball" est correct car je considère the "team" comme un seul ensemble.
En tapant sur Google, on trouve les deux.
Voilà !
See you!
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