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Message de mimilasouris posté le 28-05-2015 à 18:34:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai écrit ce texte et je fais pas mal de fautes de grammaire;ça serais cool ce serait gentil de me corriger.
Merci à tous.
C'est la suite d'un extrait de livre qu'on a lu en classe.
But what it just might be !! I felt like a breath behind me. I do not believe in ghosts, but I was in wreck anything was possible. I went back for take airbut when I the head came out of the water, I only saw the beach almost as it was away. How had I got this far without realize it, Chloe had to looking for me everywhere. I resumed my research to find out if there was a treasure and above all for know where this breath had just. My eyes were fixed on a small wooden chest located in the bottom of the calle. What did he have inside. I hurried over take it, when I had taken I came to the surface and I opened it... Whats I saw... He was filled with conffeti !!! Is this a joke ?? And Chloe and my friends emerge from the water and shouting “surprise!!!”, I did no expecting this. I was verry happy. Later I learned that the breath didn't came of neither of them. So this wreck was she really haunted?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-05-2015 18:56
Message de mimilasouris posté le 28-05-2015 à 18:34:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai écrit ce texte et je fais pas mal de fautes de grammaire;
Merci à tous.
C'est la suite d'un extrait de livre qu'on a lu en classe.
But what it just might be !! I felt like a breath behind me. I do not believe in ghosts, but I was in wreck anything was possible. I went back for take airbut when I the head came out of the water, I only saw the beach almost as it was away. How had I got this far without realize it, Chloe had to looking for me everywhere. I resumed my research to find out if there was a treasure and above all for know where this breath had just. My eyes were fixed on a small wooden chest located in the bottom of the calle. What did he have inside. I hurried over take it, when I had taken I came to the surface and I opened it... Whats I saw... He was filled with conffeti !!! Is this a joke ?? And Chloe and my friends emerge from the water and shouting “surprise!!!”, I did no expecting this. I was verry happy. Later I learned that the breath didn't came of neither of them. So this wreck was she really haunted?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-05-2015 18:56
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