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Message de ludo18 posté le 21-05-2015 à 01:34:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois rédiger un court résumé de mon mémoire.. En anglais bien sûr.. Et toute la difficulté est là..
Je pense avoir terminé mais j'aimerais bien avoir votre avis sur certaines tournures de phrases dont je ne suis pas fan (je les soulignerai)
Merci beaucoup pour votre précieuse aide !
"Nowadays, nursing has evolved a lot.
Since the 2009 university reform, nurse educators try to find the balance between practical preparation and the need to educate the future practitioner to manage healthcare and to have a broader view of the practice.
In this way, mentoring, personal support and trusting relationship are requirements of the new training.
Actually, beyond the theory and practice of nursing, you have to understand how important is what you’re doing and why you do that.
Besides, anticipation is a term which often comes into our course. It will allow us to be efficient in delicate situations.
That’s why, current and future nursing students have to be to able to develop their reflexive attitude in order to become a better nurse."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-05-2015 08:09
Message de ludo18 posté le 21-05-2015 à 01:34:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois rédiger un court résumé de mon mémoire.. En anglais bien sûr.. Et toute la difficulté est là..
Je pense avoir terminé mais j'aimerais bien avoir votre avis sur certaines tournures de phrases dont je ne suis pas fan (je les soulignerai)
Merci beaucoup pour votre précieuse aide !
"Nowadays, nursing has evolved a lot.
Since the 2009 university reform, nurse educators try to find the balance between practical preparation and the need to educate the future practitioner to manage healthcare and to have a broader view of the practice.
In this way, mentoring, personal support and trusting relationship are requirements of the new training.
Actually, beyond the theory and practice of nursing, you have to understand how important is what you’re doing and why you do that.
Besides, anticipation is a term which often comes into our course. It will allow us to be efficient in delicate situations.
That’s why, current and future nursing students have to be to able to develop their reflexive attitude in order to become a better nurse."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-05-2015 08:09
Réponse: Correction/ paragraphe de here4u, postée le 21-05-2015 à 11:40:15 (S | E)
Hello !
"Nowadays, nursing has evolved a lot.
Since the 2009 university reform, nurse educators try(construction + Temps !) to find the balance between practical preparation and the need to educate the future practitioner to manage healthcare and to have a broader view of the practice.
In this way, mentoring, personal support and trusting relationshipS are requirements of the new training.
Actually, beyond the theory and practice of nursing, you have to understand how important is what you’re doing and why you do that.
Besides, anticipation is a term which often comes (word order)into our course. It will allow us to be efficient in delicate situations.
That’s why, current and future nursing students have to be to able to develop their reflexive attitude in order to become a better nurseS."
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