Rôle femmes/correction
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Message de caroliine91 posté le 01-02-2014 à 23:25:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me dire si mon anglais est grammaticalement correct dans mon résumé sur le rôle des femmes à partir de la seconde guerre mondiale s'il vous plait ? Merci beaucoup !
After the Second World War, the role of women was to care for her children and her home, so to be a housewives while the man was working to support the family. It’s only him who gained money, he was the bread winner. Those women who had special provisions for exercise scientific role faced an even more marked than the side letters dam. This exaggeration has led , in turn, feminism of the early twentieth century. The woman enters the voting in 1944. Then the woman access to abortion rights January 17, 1975 thanks to the Veil Act. In the field of labor , women do not always have the same position as the man : It was not until 1982 that the principle of equal access to jobs says. In 1965, they can exercise a profession without the permission of their husband and collect the main unemployment benefit. Previously, they were considered dependent husband thereby precluding the right to compensation. Women now account for half of the assets : the activity rate among women 25-59 increased from 60 % in 1975 to 82% in 2007. The emancipation of women in French society was instrumental in the evolution of the family. Indeed , it becomes independent As the years . So, we can confirm that Women’s power has evolded
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-02-2014 06:47
Message de caroliine91 posté le 01-02-2014 à 23:25:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me dire si mon anglais est grammaticalement correct dans mon résumé sur le rôle des femmes à partir de la seconde guerre mondiale s'il vous plait ? Merci beaucoup !
After the Second World War, the role of women was to care for her children and her home, so to be a housewives while the man was working to support the family. It’s only him who gained money, he was the bread winner. Those women who had special provisions for exercise scientific role faced an even more marked than the side letters dam. This exaggeration has led , in turn, feminism of the early twentieth century. The woman enters the voting in 1944. Then the woman access to abortion rights January 17, 1975 thanks to the Veil Act. In the field of labor , women do not always have the same position as the man : It was not until 1982 that the principle of equal access to jobs says. In 1965, they can exercise a profession without the permission of their husband and collect the main unemployment benefit. Previously, they were considered dependent husband thereby precluding the right to compensation. Women now account for half of the assets : the activity rate among women 25-59 increased from 60 % in 1975 to 82% in 2007. The emancipation of women in French society was instrumental in the evolution of the family. Indeed , it becomes independent As the years . So, we can confirm that Women’s power has evolded
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-02-2014 06:47
Réponse: Rôle femmes/correction de gerondif, postée le 02-02-2014 à 15:06:51 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me dire si mon anglais est grammaticalement correct dans mon résumé sur le rôle des femmes à partir de la seconde guerre mondiale s'il vous plait ? Merci beaucoup !
Non, il n'est pas toujours correct, je ne sais pas comment vous traduisez, certaines phrases n'ont aucun sens:
Those women who had special provisions for exercise scientific role faced an even more marked than the side letters dam. Ces femmes qui avaient des provisions spéciales pour exercer un rôle scientifique firent face à un encore plus marqué que le barrage des lettres de côté ???
After the Second World War, the role of women was to care for her children and her home, so to be a housewives while the man was working to support the family. It’s only him who (structure française) gained money, he was the bread winner. Those women who had special provisions for exercise scientific role faced an even more marked than the side letters dam (sens?). This exaggeration has led , in turn, to feminism of the early twentieth century. The woman enters the voting (ne se dit pas)in 1944. Then the woman access(verbe et temps) to abortion rights on January 17, 1975 thanks to the Veil Act. In the field of labor , women do not always have the same position as the man (pluriel): It was not until 1982 that the principle of equal access to jobs says (dit quoi? il n'y a pas de complément). In 1965, they can exercise a profession without the permission of their husbands and collect the main unemployment benefit(sens?). Previously, they were considered dependent on their husbands thereby precluding the right to compensation. Women now account for half of the assets(sens?) : the activity rate among women aged 25 to 59 increased from 60 % in 1975 to 82% in 2007. The emancipation of women in French society was instrumental in the evolution of the family. Indeed , it(qui? les femmes ou la famille?) becomes independent As(sens? au fil des ans? over the years) the years . So, we can confirm that Women’s power has evolded
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