Exposé/Personal Project
Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En basMessage de luckytfc posté le 30-11-2013 à 16:29:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois présenter en anglais, à mes camarades de classe une matière réalisée au cours de mon cursus scolaire.
J'aimerais savoir si mon anglais est compréhensible et correct.
Je suis ici pour apprendre de mes erreurs.
Si vous vous arrêtez sur un mot de vocabulaire spécifique, n'hésitez pas le dire.
Je vous en remercie par avance.
PPE: 1st - 2nd year
The repository says:
The PPE (Personal Project Framed) is the time made available for students to build their portfolio of professional activities.
A PPE uses the reality of an organizational structure and its IT system and is especially to installing, maintaining or adapting one or more software solutions and infrastructure and to deploy the expected response to the specific needs customer service, taking into account constraints of the resources available.
At yyy Hight School:
During our first year. We have firstly create a Curriculum Vitae and a letter of motivation to prepare to send our internship application as well as our professional integration.
We have researched the different professions accessible as a result of a BTS yyy (network administrator, service technician, developer ...)
We have also learned in an autonomous way has created a static web site.
And programmed web applications by JAVASCRIPT.
At year end we completed a joint project between network administrators and developers.
We have installed and configured for a fictitious company named GSB a WEB server Debian . This server allows also to transfer files using the FTP service.
We have worked collaboratively with the developers who designed the website in PHP ,HTML and SQL.
In the second year of BTS yyy . We have also a joint project to make a fictitious organization called the M2L (house leagues Lorraine).
Until now, we had to installed and configured a server (to choose from Windows or Debian), containing a Web, FTP and SSL service.
We have also developed solutions for data backup (web, MySQL site) to the server and the users (personal data) in order to minimize the impact of data loss on the IT system.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-11-2013 17:55
Réponse: Exposé/Personal Project de luckytfc, postée le 05-12-2013 à 00:10:15 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je me permets de vous relancer.
Personne ne peut m'aider , m'orienter ?
Au moins, corriger quelques fautes flagrantes.
Je vous remercie par avance.
Cordialement
luckytfc
Réponse: Exposé/Personal Project de sherry48, postée le 05-12-2013 à 00:57:42 (S | E)
Hello.
To start with, you have some verbs that need another look and in some cases, word order that could be improved.
The repository says:
The PPE (Personal Project Framed) is the time made available for students to build their portfolio of professional activities.
A PPE uses the reality of an organizational structure and its IT system and is especially to installing, maintaining or adapting one or more software solutions and infrastructure and to deploy the expected response to the specific needs customer service, taking into account constraints of the resources available.
At yyy Hight School:
During our first year. We have firstly create__ a Curriculum Vitae and a letter of motivation to prepare to send our internship application as well as our professional integration.
We have researched the different professions accessible as a result of a BTS yyy (network administrator, service technician, developer ...)
We have also learned in an autonomous way has created a static web site.
And programmed web applications by JAVASCRIPT. (incomplete sentence)
At year end we completed a joint project between network administrators and developers.
We have installed and configured for a fictitious company named GSB a WEB server Debian . This server allows also to transfer files using the FTP service.
We have worked collaboratively with the developers who designed the website in PHP ,HTML and SQL.
In the second year of BTS yyy .(?incomplete sentence) We have also a joint project to make a fictitious organization called the M2L (house leagues Lorraine).
Until now, we had to installed and configured a server (to choose from Windows or Debian), containing a Web, FTP and SSL service.
We have also developed solutions for data backup (web, MySQL site) to the server and the users (personal data) in order to minimize the impact of data loss on the IT system.
Sherry
Réponse: Exposé/Personal Project de luckytfc, postée le 07-12-2013 à 22:20:57 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je vous remercie pour votre aide.
Je corrigerai tout cela par moi même.
Merci encore.
Réponse: Exposé/Personal Project de luckytfc, postée le 14-12-2013 à 23:39:40 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je suis passé a l'oral et cela n'allait pas , il faut que je recommence, donc je me permets de relancer le sujet.
Voici le texte que j'ai lu :
The repository says:
The PPE (Personal Project Framed) is the time made available for students to build their portfolio of professional activities.
A PPE uses the reality of an organizational structure and its IT system for installing, maintaining or adapting one or more software solutions and infrastructure and to deploy specific service, taking into account constraints of the resources available.
At xxxx High School:
During our first year. We had firstly create a Curriculum Vitae and a letter of motivation for send for our internship application as well as our professional integration.
We have researched the different professions accessible as a result of a SIO(network administrator, service technician, developer ...)
We also learned in an autonomous way has created a static web site.
And we programmed any web applications in JAVASCRIPT.
At the end of the year we realized a joint project between network administrators and developers.
We installed and configured for a fictitious company named GSB a WEB server Debian . This server allows to transfer files using the FTP service.
We worked collaboratively with the developers who designed the website in PHP ,HTML and SQL.
In the second year of BTS SIO ,we are realizing a joint project for a fictitious organization called the M2L (house leagues Lorraine).
Until now, we had to installed and configured a server (to choose from Windows or Debian), containing a Web, FTP and a security service named SSL.
We also developed solutions for data backup (web, MySQL site) to the server and the users (personal data) in order to minimize the impact of data loss on the IT system.
J'aimerais savoir ce qui ne va pas .
Je vous remercie par avance de votre aide.
Cordialement
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Modifié par luckytfc le 14-12-2013 23:40
Réponse: Exposé/Personal Project de sherry48, postée le 15-12-2013 à 23:28:20 (S | E)
Hello.
I mainly looked at errors with verbs. Sorry, I didn't have much time.
...During our first year. We had firstly create a Curriculum Vitae and a letter of motivation for send for our internship application as well as our professional integration.
We have researched the different professions accessible as a result of a SIO(network administrator, service technician, developer ...)
We also learned in an autonomous way has created a static web site.
And we programmed any (any is usually used in a negative sense) web applications in JAVASCRIPT.
At the end of the year we realized a joint project between network administrators and developers.
We installed and configured for a fictitious company named GSB (place at end of sentence)a WEB server Debian . This server allows to transfer files using the FTP service.
...Until now, we had to installed and configured a server (to choose from Windows or Debian), containing a Web, FTP and a security service named SSL....
Sherry
Réponse: Exposé/Personal Project de luckytfc, postée le 15-12-2013 à 23:43:55 (S | E)
Dear sherry
Thanks for your reply.
I will modify my errors.
Kind regards
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