Raconter /les autres me voient

Raconter /les autres me voient
Message de gessi55 posté le 25-09-2013 à 19:43:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,

je dois raconter comment je pense que les autres me voient.
Je l'ai fait mais j'ai besoin au plus vite de votre corrrection :

For the second subject I am going to say to you how I think that the others see me, all at first I chose Stroumphette because c a quite quiet girl rather naïve and with a big heart she loves everybody in the most beautiful of the worlds. I think that people so see me because I am kind and people think rather fast that I am naïve and that I love everybody, certainly it is rather true but I also have my character not always present but as even there. Here is how I think that the others see me.

Merci pour vos réponses.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-09-2013 21:19

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Réponse: Raconter /les autres me voient de notrepere, postée le 25-09-2013 à 21:48:19 (S | E)
Hello

For the second subject I am going to say to you how (I think that) the others see me, all at first I chose Stroumphette because c a quite quiet girl rather naïve and with a big heart. she loves everybody in the most beautiful of the worlds. I think that people so see me because I am kind and people think rather fast that I am naïve and that I love everybody, certainly it is rather true but I also have my character not always present but as even there. Here This is how I think that (the) others see me.

There are still other errors. Fix these errors first and then repost.

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Réponse: Raconter /les autres me voient de gessi55, postée le 26-09-2013 à 18:29:29 (S | E)
ok thanks ; how many errors are there ?

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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-09-2013 19:04
Merci de corriger vos erreurs.

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