Lettre motivation/aide
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Message de sousouch posté le 01-07-2013 à 19:16:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai besoin d'aide au sujet d'une lettre de motivation que je dois écrire pour pouvoir entrer en section europeenne au lycée . Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs ? Vous pouvez aussi m'aider à reformuler quelques phrases...
Merci d'avance !
Dear madam,
I am writing you this cover letter in order to demonstrate my movitation and my determination to join the European section of my high school next year.
I want to improve my capacities in English .
This section is a nice way to learn about the anglophone countries culture and history.
In my opinion speaking this language fluently is really important . It's a real advantage for my future career, travel and everyday life .
I know that this section would give me more work but I'm a serious and motivated student .
For me, it would be an honor to integrate this english section .
Hoping a positive response, thank you very much for your time and attention .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-07-2013 21:18
Message de sousouch posté le 01-07-2013 à 19:16:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai besoin d'aide au sujet d'une lettre de motivation que je dois écrire pour pouvoir entrer en section europeenne au lycée . Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs ? Vous pouvez aussi m'aider à reformuler quelques phrases...
Merci d'avance !
Dear madam,
I am writing you this cover letter in order to demonstrate my movitation and my determination to join the European section of my high school next year.
I want to improve my capacities in English .
This section is a nice way to learn about the anglophone countries culture and history.
In my opinion speaking this language fluently is really important . It's a real advantage for my future career, travel and everyday life .
I know that this section would give me more work but I'm a serious and motivated student .
For me, it would be an honor to integrate this english section .
Hoping a positive response, thank you very much for your time and attention .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-07-2013 21:18
Réponse: Lettre motivation/aide de gnanga, postée le 04-07-2013 à 12:22:16 (S | E)
Hello sousouch,
some errors in blue and suggestions in green:
Dear madam,
I am writing to you
this cover letter in order to demonstrate my movitation and my determination (too heavy) I would like to improve my capacities in English .
This section is a great way to learn about the anglophone countries culture and history.
In my opinion speaking
I know that this section would give me more work but I'm a serious and motivated student .
For me, it would be an honor to integrate this English section .
Hoping a positive response (another twist), thank you very much for
Good luck.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-07-2013 13:06
Réponse: Lettre motivation/aide de sousouch, postée le 04-07-2013 à 18:50:55 (S | E)
Hello
Thank you very much for your help !
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