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Correction /wooden boat

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Correction /wooden boat
Message de emiliana20 posté le 28-04-2013 à 17:34:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour

pouvez-vous me dire si cette rédaction contient des fautes d'orthographe ?

This picture represents a big wooden boat with white ships and it is crossing the ocean or the see a bit troubled . This picture is colourfull , indeed there is a lot of blue with the water and the sky but also a lot of white with the clouds , the ships and the lot of gulls flying around the boat . At the first sight , this picture seems joyfull it looks like a painting in kids bedroom . But if we pay attentuin to the ocean we bacame aware of dead black mans and womans floating in the ocean . This ocean is probably the Atlantic ocean because this picture represent the Transatlantic Slave Trade. Indeed when slaves were bought in Africa , they were carried in boat to America . Their conditions were horrible , they were locked , whipped, stacked and they needed to obey somebody who where cruel and merciless. So often , slaves died and they were thrown in the ocean and this picture represent that .

Merci d'avance

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2013 17:56


Réponse: Correction /wooden boat de kadzona, postée le 28-04-2013 à 18:32:08 (S | E)
Hello: if all you're asking for are spelling errors "fautes d'orthographe", I've highlighted those I've found.


This picture represents a big wooden boat with white ships and it is crossing the ocean or the see a bit troubled . This picture is colourfull , indeed there is a lot of blue with the water and the sky but also a lot of white with the clouds , the ships and the lot of gulls flying around the boat . At the first sight , this picture seems joyfull it looks like a painting in kids bedroom . But if we pay attentuin to the ocean we bacame aware of dead black mans and womans floating in the ocean . This ocean is probably the Atlantic ocean because this picture represent the Transatlantic Slave Trade. Indeed when slaves were bought in Africa , they were carried in boat to America . Their conditions were horrible , they were locked , whipped, stacked and they needed to obey somebody who where cruel and merciless. So often , slaves died and they were thrown in the ocean and this picture represent that .

Hope this is of some help: you might also have used a dictionary.



Réponse: Correction /wooden boat de emiliana20, postée le 28-04-2013 à 18:50:13 (S | E)
Bonjour ,
Je pense avoir tout corrigé
Merci beaucoup , en fait la moitié de mes erreurs sont des erreurs d'innttention .
sea / colourful / joyful / attention / became / men and women / were /

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2013 20:33




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