Correction/sentence

Correction/sentence
Message from onlyenglish posted on 24-02-2013 at 16:23:05 (D | E | F)
Hello,

Could you help me please?
is this sentence correct?
"Mina's teacher's role was so important in her life."
Regards

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Edited by lucile83 on 24-02-2013 18:09

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Re: Correction/sentence from egyption, posted on 24-02-2013 at 23:17:03 (D | E)
Hello,
I think but I am not sure.

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Edited by egyption on 24-02-2013 23:19

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Edited by lucile83 on 24-02-2013 23:30

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Re: Correction/sentence from notrepere, posted on 25-02-2013 at 00:33:17 (D | E)
hello

What are you trying to say? That Mina's teacher liked being a teacher?

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Re: Correction/sentence from onlyenglish, posted on 25-02-2013 at 14:04:40 (D | E)
Hello everybody
and thank you all for answering.
I want to say Mina's teacher did a great work for her during her (Mina's) chilhood when she(Mina) was a student, when she(the teacher)was teaching Mina.
Can we just say: Mina's teacher's role is important in her life(Mina)?
Regards.

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Edited by onlyenglish on 25-02-2013 14:20

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Re: Correction/sentence from lucile83, posted on 25-02-2013 at 15:01:37 (D | E)
Hello,

I'd say
Mina's teacher used to have an important part in Mina's life.
...or something like that

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Re: Correction/sentence from onlyenglish, posted on 25-02-2013 at 15:52:29 (D | E)
Hello Lucile, thank you so much for your reply. Is the previous sentence wrong or we'd better avoid it?

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Re: Correction/sentence from lucile83, posted on 25-02-2013 at 17:24:14 (D | E)
Hello,

It is not really wrong, but it is not clear enough and too complicated.
Better forget it

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