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Message de mickeal posté le 16-06-2022 à 18:10:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Dans le cadre de mon cours d'anglais je dois réaliser une petite interview pour un job.J'ai répondu à plusieurs questions typiques auxquelles je serai amené à devoir répondre et j'aimerai bien une correction pour savoir si mes phrases sont grammaticalement correctes.
how did you hear about the position ?
i found an advertisement about the job on the internet
why are you interested in this position
i feel my skill can match with the company.
i have learned a lot about firewall and security network in general i love it and i hope to work in this field now. I want to grown up and improve myself every day like your company. your industry match very well with my skills and my need.
I have also the same values as you like respect,fighting spirit,teamwork.
tell me about yourself ?/ How would you describe yourself?
My name is Mickeal Druard I live in namur. Im passionate about infomatique since childhood. I am a student in my 2nd year of bachelor in security of system where I have learned a lot about network security, firewall and more. Im also a big fan of football, I practiced a lot younger a think that helped me to become more comfortable with people and developing my fighting spirit a lot. I have a lot of other hobby like spending times with my friends or playing video games which allowed me to improve my ability to concentrate during long period
Why did you choose your degree subject?
Like I said I have always been in love with informatique. As a child I loved watching movies and other with hacker etc so i thought why not working in this field but on the good guys' side and help secure computer systems.
• What are your main strengths and weaknesses?
I think I am quite versatile. I can work alone as well as in a group. I have a good relationship with people.
As another strength, i am very persistent. When something doesn't work properly I can spend many hours trying to find out why it doesn't work. I think this is a very important quality in IT.
As a weakness I think I am too detail oriented I sometimes spend too much time on non-critical things.
What is your major achievement?
I haven't made any great achievements in my life yet but it will surely be to get this degree and why not this job
Where do you see yourself in five years’ time?
In this company I hope. I hope to help him achieve his goals and projects and to be fully integrated into the family of this company and grow within the company
Do you have any questions for me?
Can you describe me a typical day in your industry ?
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-06-2022 20:24
Mise en forme et trop de fautes d'orthographe en français !
On écrit I, pas i pour le JE français; je vous l'ai déjà dit !!
Message de mickeal posté le 16-06-2022 à 18:10:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Dans le cadre de mon cours d'anglais je dois réaliser une petite interview pour un job.J'ai répondu à plusieurs questions typiques auxquelles je serai amené à devoir répondre et j'aimerai bien une correction pour savoir si mes phrases sont grammaticalement correctes.
how did you hear about the position ?
i found an advertisement about the job on the internet
why are you interested in this position
i feel my skill can match with the company.
i have learned a lot about firewall and security network in general i love it and i hope to work in this field now. I want to grown up and improve myself every day like your company. your industry match very well with my skills and my need.
I have also the same values as you like respect,fighting spirit,teamwork.
tell me about yourself ?/ How would you describe yourself?
My name is Mickeal Druard I live in namur. Im passionate about infomatique since childhood. I am a student in my 2nd year of bachelor in security of system where I have learned a lot about network security, firewall and more. Im also a big fan of football, I practiced a lot younger a think that helped me to become more comfortable with people and developing my fighting spirit a lot. I have a lot of other hobby like spending times with my friends or playing video games which allowed me to improve my ability to concentrate during long period
Why did you choose your degree subject?
Like I said I have always been in love with informatique. As a child I loved watching movies and other with hacker etc so i thought why not working in this field but on the good guys' side and help secure computer systems.
• What are your main strengths and weaknesses?
I think I am quite versatile. I can work alone as well as in a group. I have a good relationship with people.
As another strength, i am very persistent. When something doesn't work properly I can spend many hours trying to find out why it doesn't work. I think this is a very important quality in IT.
As a weakness I think I am too detail oriented I sometimes spend too much time on non-critical things.
What is your major achievement?
I haven't made any great achievements in my life yet but it will surely be to get this degree and why not this job
Where do you see yourself in five years’ time?
In this company I hope. I hope to help him achieve his goals and projects and to be fully integrated into the family of this company and grow within the company
Do you have any questions for me?
Can you describe me a typical day in your industry ?
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-06-2022 20:24
Mise en forme et trop de fautes d'orthographe en français !
On écrit I, pas i pour le JE français; je vous l'ai déjà dit !!
Réponse : Correction/job interview de gerondif, postée le 16-06-2022 à 19:12:15 (S | E)
Bonjour
Pensez aux majuscules et au I toujours en majuscule pour dire je, où qu'il soit dans la phrase.
Erreurs en bleu.
how did you hear about the position ?
i found an advertisement about the job on the internet
why are you interested in this position
i feel my skill can match with the company. (match est transitif)
i have learned a lot about firewall(pluriel) and security network in general i love it and i hope to work in this field now. I want to grown(infinitf) up and improve myself(inutile) every day like(sens ? Vous allez vous améliorer comme l'entreprise ??) your company. your industry match(accord) very well with my skills and my need.
I have also(placement) the same values as you like respect,fighting spirit,teamwork.
tell me about yourself ?/ How would you describe yourself?
My name is Mickeal Druard I live in Namur. Im(temps: present perfect avec depuis, since) passionate about infomatique since childhood. I am a student in my 2nd year of bachelor in security of system (français traduit) where I have learned a lot about network security, firewall(pluriel) and more. Im also a big fan of football, I practiced (practise est le verbe et practice le nom en anglais britannique)a lot when I was younger. a( vous confondez a et I, ou alors le micro a mal capté votre texte parlé) think that helped me to become more comfortable with people and developing(construction avec help) my fighting spirit a lot. I have a lot of other hobby (autant mettre un pluriel s'il yy en a beaucoup) like spending times(singulier) with my friends or playing video games,(virgule, pour que which signife "ce qui")which allowed me to improve my ability to concentrate during long periods.
Why did you choose your degree subject?
Like I said (très familier) I have always been in love with informatique. As a child I loved watching movies and other (maladroit) with hacker etc (maladroit, pluriel) so i thought why not working (base verbale) in this field but on the good guys' side and help secure computer systems.
• What are your main strengths and weaknesses?
I think I am quite versatile. I can work alone as well as in a group. I have a good relationship with people.
As (ne convient pas)another strength, i am very persistent. When something doesn't work properly, I can spend many hours trying to find out why it doesn't work. I think this is a very important quality in IT.
As a weakness I think I am too detail-oriented I sometimes spend too much time on non-critical things.
• What is your major achievement?
I haven't made any great achievements in my life yet but it will surely be to get (gérondif) this degree and why not this job
• Where do you see yourself in five years’ time?
In this company I hope. I hope to help him (la firme n'est pas humaine) achieve his goals and projects and to be fully integrated into the family of this company and grow within the company
• Do you have any questions for me?
Can you describe to me a typical day in your industry (maladroit) ?
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