Playing with words/21

Playing with words/21
Message de here4u posté le 08-07-2021 à 11:31:39 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Voici le nouveau "Playing and working with words", autrement dit, votre nouvelle "torture" mensuelle ...
La date limite pour cet exercice est fin juillet 2021. (Ne pas dépasser 60 mots … Merci. )

Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu ...

Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. "Easy", isn't it?

- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
- You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!

PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS!

Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens. (Il ne doit y avoir qu'UN SEUL POINT dans votre phrase - à la fin )
Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte (moins de 60 mots ...) Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !
Cet exercice est TRES difficile, , c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne pouvez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire). Here are the words:

- to WORRY - to STORE - a SCHEME - an ATTIC - CAREFUL - HIGH - WHENEVER - THOUGH - + un "WOULD" de volonté.
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Voyons qui fera la plus belle phrase courte ... THE FORCE is with you!

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Réponse : Playing with words/21 de maxwell, postée le 08-07-2021 à 21:31:30 (S | E)
READY TO BE CORRECTED

Hello Here4U
Here's a little story about stolen jewels I hope you'll like it

It was part of the SCHEME that he STORED the HIGH-end jewels in his ATTIC but WHENEVER I reminded him his promise, he WOULD not ; THOUGH I'm CAREFUL about these things, I'm WORRYING... (36)

J'ai hésité pour le temps : Stored. est-ce qu'il aurait fallu mettre should store ?

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Réponse : Playing with words/21 de melena53, postée le 13-07-2021 à 14:31:35 (S | E)
Hello,

Although the ATTIC is too HIGH I WOULD tidy my house and STORE all my old stuff in there; THOUGH I hace to be CAREFUL of course...WHENEVER I go up that evil staircase and not WORRY about the lack of a lift SCHEME.

Ps/First time I participate in this kind of exercise, I hope to I have followed all the instructions! :-)

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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-07-2021 14:57
gris

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Réponse : Playing with words/21 de taiji43, postée le 14-07-2021 à 10:34:09 (S | E)
hello Here4U,

Back to Anglais Facile on my lovely computer from Cotentin's rain, fog , mist and wind ...

READY TO BE CORRECTED
WHENEVER I' d ask him why he had this SCHEME and STORED his office in this HIGH nice ATTIC , he WOULD answer me : becaus I wanted quietness, though difficult of access, I am careful, don't worry (36)

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Réponse : Playing with words/21 de susu52, postée le 16-07-2021 à 19:34:08 (S | E)
Hi everyone , this is the first time I participate.
I feel a bit ridiculous compared to the great work you've made.
Here is my try !
Hope, I have respected all the rules.

Even THOUGH Paul has plenty of souvenirs from many countries he visited, a very HIGH-necked giraffe or a sign warning "Be CAREFUL" for example, the SCHEME he uses to STORE all of them in the ATTIC allows him not to WORRY about the space he needs, and even buy some more WHENEVER he WOULD fancy.
55 words.

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Réponse : Playing with words/21 de here4u, postée le 31-07-2021 à 22:55:03 (S | E)
Hello, Dear Friends!

Un grand BRAVO et , bien sûr, pour votre travail sur ce tirage (qui n'était pas facile). Merci aussi d'avoir consacré (sinon sacrifié), un peu (beaucoup ... ) de votre temps de loisirs à ce long travail de création.
J'ai, comme d'habitude, corrigé vos phrases "à minima" afin de préserver vos idées personnelles et leur expression (dans la mesure du possible)!

- It was part of the SCHEME that he STORED the HIGH-end jewels in his ATTIC but WHENEVER I reminded him OF his promise, he WOULD not; THOUGH I'm CAREFUL about these things, I'm WORRYING... (36 words)


- Although the ATTIC was too HIGH, I WOULD tidy my house and STORE all my old stuff in there; THOUGH I have to be CAREFUL of course..., WHENEVER I go up that terrible staircase and don’t WORRY about the lack of a lift SCHEME. (« Lift Scheme ? » is something very specific, normally… Is that what you meant ?)


- WHENEVER I'd ask him why he had this SCHEME and STORED his office things in this nice HIGH and vast ATTIC, he WOULD answer me : because I wanted quietness, THOUGH difficult of access, I am CAREFUL, don't WORRY! (36 words)


- Even THOUGH Paul has plenty of souvenirs from many countries he visited, a very HIGH-necked giraffe or a sign warning "Be CAREFUL" for example, the SCHEME he uses to STORE all of them in the ATTIC allows him not to WORRY about the space he needs, and even buy some more WHENEVER he WOULD fancy. 55 words.

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