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Message de supersushi69 posté le 22-02-2021 à 14:28:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Je suis actuellement en Master de Psychologie. En fait je suis en reprise d'études et je n'ai pas pratiqué l'anglais depuis bien longtemps... Bref, dans notre TD d'anglais, nous devons résumer un Ted Talk. J'ai choisi un Ted sur l'addiction. Est ce que l'un d'entre vous aurait la gentillesse de me dire si mon résumé ci-dessous est correct ? Je vous remercie beaucoup !!
Why do we become dependent ? Addiction doesn’t only come from the drug itself and what it contains. For example, during the Vietnam War, 20 per cent of American soldiers took heroin. But, at the end of the war, 95 per cent of them stopped. Without going to rehab. So, why do some people have addiction problems ? Professor Peter Cohen talks of the human’s important need of bond. Human beings need to be connected to each other to be happy and in good health. But, if they are isolated, or traumatized by events in their lives, disconnected to other people, they will fill this need of bond by taking drugs. Because it will relieve them. They will bond with something. Currently, to treat the addicts, society punishes them and isolates them in jail. To cure addiction, people must not only be abstinent. The individual healing also involves social recovery.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2021 14:50
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Message de supersushi69 posté le 22-02-2021 à 14:28:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Je suis actuellement en Master de Psychologie. En fait je suis en reprise d'études et je n'ai pas pratiqué l'anglais depuis bien longtemps... Bref, dans notre TD d'anglais, nous devons résumer un Ted Talk. J'ai choisi un Ted sur l'addiction. Est ce que l'un d'entre vous aurait la gentillesse de me dire si mon résumé ci-dessous est correct ? Je vous remercie beaucoup !!
Why do we become dependent ? Addiction doesn’t only come from the drug itself and what it contains. For example, during the Vietnam War, 20 per cent of American soldiers took heroin. But, at the end of the war, 95 per cent of them stopped. Without going to rehab. So, why do some people have addiction problems ? Professor Peter Cohen talks of the human’s important need of bond. Human beings need to be connected to each other to be happy and in good health. But, if they are isolated, or traumatized by events in their lives, disconnected to other people, they will fill this need of bond by taking drugs. Because it will relieve them. They will bond with something. Currently, to treat the addicts, society punishes them and isolates them in jail. To cure addiction, people must not only be abstinent. The individual healing also involves social recovery.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2021 14:50
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Réponse : Résumé /Psycho de gerondif, postée le 22-02-2021 à 19:33:10 (S | E)
Bonjour
Erreurs en bleu
Why do we become dependent ? Addiction doesn’t only come from the drug itself and what it contains. For example, during the Vietnam War, 20 per cent of American soldiers took heroin. But, at the end of the war, 95 per cent of them stopped without (suppression du point) going to rehab. So, why do some people have addiction problems ? Professor Peter Cohen talks of(un peu familier. speaks about, deals with...) the human’s important need of bond (the important need of bond for human beings). Human beings need to be connected to each other to be happy and in good health. But, if they are isolated, or traumatized by events in their lives, disconnected to(from, séparation. avec to, on y va) other people, they will fill(confusion entre to fill, i court, remplir et to feel, i long, ressentir) this need of bond by taking drugs because (suppression du point) it will relieve them. They will bond with something. Currently (Nowadays), to treat the addicts, society punishes them and isolates them in jail. To cure addiction, people must not only be abstinent but
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