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Message de hayti posté le 10-06-2019 à 12:36:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
I need your help in order to correct this writing.
Thanks in advance !
I think that Azrou is the best city I had ever visited. This city is well-known by kindness of its people ,that gives the feeling of being with a big and loving family. In this city we can find many attractive things such as special modern and traditional clothes, luxury jweleries,wonderful natural views that includes mountains and fortress. The houses in Azrou are designed with a specific design in order to be adapted to the bad weather in winter, this season when the snow cover the town and people come from all over the world to ski and have fan.
Thank you very much.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-06-2019 14:53
Message de hayti posté le 10-06-2019 à 12:36:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
I need your help in order to correct this writing.
Thanks in advance !
I think that Azrou is the best city I had ever visited. This city is well-known by kindness of its people ,that gives the feeling of being with a big and loving family. In this city we can find many attractive things such as special modern and traditional clothes, luxury jweleries,wonderful natural views that includes mountains and fortress. The houses in Azrou are designed with a specific design in order to be adapted to the bad weather in winter, this season when the snow cover the town and people come from all over the world to ski and have fan.
Thank you very much.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-06-2019 14:53
Réponse : Best city/correction de bluestar, postée le 10-06-2019 à 16:28:24 (S | E)
Bonjour...
I think that Azrou is the best city I had (temps?) ever visited. This city is well-known by for the kindness of its people ,that gives the feeling of being with a big and loving family. In this city we can find many attractive things such as special modern and traditional clothes, luxury jweleries,wonderful natural views that includes(conjugaison a revoir-- "views" est pluriel) mountains and fortress (forests?). The houses in Azrou are designed with a specific design maladroit - ("are designed specifically" irait mieux) in order to be adapted to the bad weather in winter, this season when the snow cover (Conjugaison) the town and people come from all over the world to ski and have fanfun'
Réponse : Best city/correction de hayti, postée le 10-06-2019 à 21:10:06 (S | E)
Bonjour, merci beaucoup.
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