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Message de aurelienworks posté le 19-03-2019 à 10:28:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin que vous m'aidiez à confirmer si ces phrases sont correctement écrites s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance ;)
1- The change of Prime Ministerwill have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.
2- It's a variation of that card game
3- We have reached our goal, we have a new accomodation
4- He's efficient. His lasts footages are very good.
5- I am reluctant, i lashed out at me yesterday
6- Shortly, we will do something unusual
7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pau a rent here.
8- He's an impersonater. His performances are very successful.
9- For one he does something unusual !
10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !
11- This shopkeeper is also bowler.
12- He is involved in a dozen crimes.
13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, i feel it !
14- He is motivated but it shouldn't feel him above the law...
-> I'm not sure at all how to translate it... "il ne faudrait pas qu'il se croie au dessus des lois)
15- He easier to recruit someone punctual
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-03-2019 10:54
C'est trop long 30 phrases! long à corriger et au fil des messages ce sera difficile de s'y reconnaitre.
Ouvrez un 2e topic avec les 15 autres phrases que je vous renvoie, merci.
Message de aurelienworks posté le 19-03-2019 à 10:28:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin que vous m'aidiez à confirmer si ces phrases sont correctement écrites s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance ;)
1- The change of Prime Ministerwill have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.
2- It's a variation of that card game
3- We have reached our goal, we have a new accomodation
4- He's efficient. His lasts footages are very good.
5- I am reluctant, i lashed out at me yesterday
6- Shortly, we will do something unusual
7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pau a rent here.
8- He's an impersonater. His performances are very successful.
9- For one he does something unusual !
10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !
11- This shopkeeper is also bowler.
12- He is involved in a dozen crimes.
13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, i feel it !
14- He is motivated but it shouldn't feel him above the law...
-> I'm not sure at all how to translate it... "il ne faudrait pas qu'il se croie au dessus des lois)
15- He easier to recruit someone punctual
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-03-2019 10:54
C'est trop long 30 phrases! long à corriger et au fil des messages ce sera difficile de s'y reconnaitre.
Ouvrez un 2e topic avec les 15 autres phrases que je vous renvoie, merci.
Réponse : Phrases /correction de gerondif, postée le 19-03-2019 à 12:42:08 (S | E)
Bonjour
1- The change of Prime Minister will have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.
2- It's a variation of that card game
3- We have reached our goal, we have a new accomodation (accommodation ne me semble pas fonctionner avec a, comme luggage, furniture...)
4- He's efficient. His lasts footages are very good.
5- I am reluctant, i (he) lashed out at me yesterday
6- Shortly, we will do something unusual
7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pau pay a rent here.
8- He's an impersonater. His performances are very successful.
9- For one (once?) he does something unusual !
10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !
11- This shopkeeper is also a bowler.
12- He is involved in a dozen crimes. (pour 12 pile, sinon in dozens of crimes, dans des dizaines de...)
13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, i(majuscule) feel it !
14- He is motivated but it shouldn't feel him (construction incorrecte) above the law...
-> I'm not sure at all how to translate it... "il ne faudrait pas qu'il se croie au-dessus des lois)(it shouldn't make him feel above the law)
15- He easier(il est plus facile de ? sûrement pas he et mettez un verbe) to recruit someone punctual
Réponse : Phrases /correction de aurelienworks, postée le 19-03-2019 à 15:25:42 (S | E)
Merci gérondif, quelques erreurs d'étourderie en effet, désolé, très mmotivé pour apprendre mais le temps manque parfois !
1- The change of Prime Minister will have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.
2- It's a variation of that card game
3- We have reached our goal, we have new accomodation .C'est mieux d'utiliser accomodation ou housing ou flat/apartment/house?
4- He's efficient. His last footages are very good.
5- I am reluctant, he lashed out at me yesterday
6- Shortly, we will do something unusual
7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pay a rent here.
8- He's an impersonator. His performances are very successful.
9- For once he does something unusual !
10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !
11- This shopkeeper is also a bowler.
12- He is involved in a dozen crimes.
13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, I feel it !
14- He is motivated but it shouldn't make him above the the law.
15- It's easier to recruit someone punctual.
Réponse : Phrases /correction de gerondif, postée le 19-03-2019 à 15:36:04 (S | E)
Bonjour
1- The change of Prime Minister will have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.
2- It's a variation of that card game
3- We have reached our goal, we have new accomodation (deux M) C'est mieux d'utiliser accomodation ou housing ou flat/apartment/house ?
tout dépend de ce que vous voulez dire, il n'y a pas de "mieux" accommodation, c'est le logement en général, avoir un toit sur sa tête, housing fait plus penser à la politique de la mairie en matière de logement, a new flat, un nouvel appart, apartment en américain,flat en anglais, et house une maison)
4- He's efficient. His last footages are very good.
5- I am reluctant, he lashed out at me yesterday
6- Shortly, we will do something unusual
7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pay a rent here.
8- He's an impersonator. His performances are very successful.
9- For once he does (is doing) something unusual !
10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !
11- This shopkeeper is also a bowler.
12- He is involved in a dozen crimes.
13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, I feel it !
14- He is motivated but it shouldn't make him feel above the law.
une variante he had better not deem himself above the law.
15- It's easier to recruit someone punctual.
Réponse : Phrases /correction de aurelienworks, postée le 19-03-2019 à 16:24:08 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup gérondif pour votre aide
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