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Chinese/ portrait
Message de fannyb posté le 09-02-2019 à 22:41:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je dois réaliser un portrait chinois; pouvez-vous m’indiquer s’il est cohérent et ne comporte aucune erreur?

If I were a game I’d be Naruto storm 4 because it’s the last game of Naruto Shippuden.
If I were a book I’d be a Death note because it's the only book which can change the world. faut-il remplacer " which" par " who " ?
If I were a movie I’d be my neighbor Totoro because this story is so cute.
If I were a season I’d be winter because during the wintertime we can make a snowman. je ne suis pas sûr du sens de la phrase
If I were an animal I’d be a fox because he is crafty.
If I were a city I’d be Tokyo because it’s the city of the new technologies.
If I were a journal I be Le journal de Mickey because there are a lot of comics in there. j’ai un gros doute sur "in there"

Merci pour vos réponses.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-02-2019 22:57

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Réponse : Chinese/ portrait de laure95, postée le 10-02-2019 à 12:01:20 (S | E)
Bonjour,
If I were a game I’d be Naruto storm 4 because it’s the last game of Naruto Shippuden. OK.
If I were a book I’d be a Death note because it's the only book which can change the world. faut-il remplacer " which" par " who " ?: non, who doit avoir pour antécédent une personne.
If I were a movie I’d be my neighbor Totoro because this story is so cute. OK.
If I were a season I’d be winter because during the wintertime we can make a snowman. je ne suis pas sûr du sens de la phrase : votre phrase a un sens.
If I were an animal I’d be a fox because he is crafty. un renard n'est pas une personne, donc "he" ne convient pas.
If I were a city I’d be Tokyo because it’s the city of the new technologies. Enlever "the".
If I were a journal I be Le journal de Mickey because there are a lot of comics in there. j’ai un gros doute sur "in there: 'journal' = mot français. "I be" est mal construit. "there" n'est pas correct pour moi.

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Réponse : Chinese/ portrait de fannyb, postée le 10-02-2019 à 12:28:52 (S | E)
If I were a game I’d be Naruto storm 4 because it’s the last game of Naruto Shippuden. OK.ce ne serait pas mieux si je disais " because it’s the last Naruto Shippuden game" ?

If I were a book I’d be Death note because it's the only book which can change the world.

If I were a movie I’d be my neighbor Totoro because this story is so cute. OK.

If I were a season I’d be winter because during the wintertime we can make a snowman.

If I were an animal I’d be a fox because it’s crafty.

If I were a city I’d be Tokyo because it’s the city of new technologies.

If I were a magazine I’d be Le journal de Mickey because there are a lot of comics in this magazine .

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Réponse : Chinese/ portrait de laure95, postée le 10-02-2019 à 15:22:13 (S | E)
If I were a game I’d be Naruto storm 4 because it’s the last game of Naruto Shippuden. OK.ce ne serait pas mieux si je disais " because it’s the last Naruto Shippuden game" ? Les 2 tournures sont équivalentes. Votre 2è proposition allège la phrase.

If I were a book I’d be Death note because it's the only book which can change the world. OK.

If I were a city I’d be Tokyo because it’s the city of new technologies. OK.

If I were a magazine I’d be Le journal de Mickey because there are a lot of comics in this magazine . OK.

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Réponse : Chinese/ portrait de fannyb, postée le 10-02-2019 à 16:00:59 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup
Bonne journée

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