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Message de louguorio posté le 21-04-2018 à 16:55:46
Bonjour,
j'ai un oral d'anglais où je dois prendre une photo portant sur un sujet critique de nos jours. J'ai choisi comme thème la dépendance aux énergies fossiles.
Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît m'aider ?
Merci beaucoup à vous.
louguorio.
EOC: Dependence on fossil fuels
You are a photographer. You're decided to denounce one of the burning issues of our society. Take a photo and motivate your choice with a 1'30 speech.
The products of the decomposition of forests and micro-organisms millions of years ago, fossil fuels slept underground until Homo Sapiens forced their extraction in the mid-19th century. More than ever, hydrocarbons irrigate our lives. Addicts or not, we're gonna have to find our happiness somewhere else. Here are 5 reasons to let the carbon rest in peace.
First - It's messing up the climate
Since 1880, the average global temperature has risen by 0.85°C, resulting in melting Arctic ice, droughts and hurricanes...
Second - Acting costs less than doing nothing
For every dollar not invested in cleaner technologies before 2020, an additional $4.30 will have to be spent after 2020 to offset increased emissions.
Third - Crisis of withdrawal can be avoided...
No less than 60% of the world's energy consumption would be wasted (appliances on standby, traffic jams, poorly insulated homes...). By limiting heat loss from buildings and increasing the performance and efficiency of appliances, we can then do better with less.
Fourth - Transition is good for employment
Fossil fuels do not create more jobs than renewable, and the energy transition will not put us all out of work. It is even the opposite: in the United States, solar energy already uses more than coal, and the gap is widening.
And finally - This is a public health issue
He is sometimes called the "invisible killer". Water, air and soil pollution caused by fossil extraction and burning is the leading cause of death in the world, killing three times more than HIV, malaria and tuberculosis combined.
In conclusion, dependence on oil, coal and gas has reached unprecedented levels, threatening the environment and the global economy. Yet alternatives exist and are now profitable.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-04-2018 17:50
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-04-2018 16:57
Bonjour,
Votre texte provient de toute évidence d'un traducteur en ligne, ce que nous ne corrigeons pas car votre travail n'a aucun intérêt.
Message de louguorio posté le 21-04-2018 à 16:55:46
Bonjour,
j'ai un oral d'anglais où je dois prendre une photo portant sur un sujet critique de nos jours. J'ai choisi comme thème la dépendance aux énergies fossiles.
Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît m'aider ?
Merci beaucoup à vous.
louguorio.
EOC: Dependence on fossil fuels
You are a photographer. You're decided to denounce one of the burning issues of our society. Take a photo and motivate your choice with a 1'30 speech.
The products of the decomposition of forests and micro-organisms millions of years ago, fossil fuels slept underground until Homo Sapiens forced their extraction in the mid-19th century. More than ever, hydrocarbons irrigate our lives. Addicts or not, we're gonna have to find our happiness somewhere else. Here are 5 reasons to let the carbon rest in peace.
First - It's messing up the climate
Since 1880, the average global temperature has risen by 0.85°C, resulting in melting Arctic ice, droughts and hurricanes...
Second - Acting costs less than doing nothing
For every dollar not invested in cleaner technologies before 2020, an additional $4.30 will have to be spent after 2020 to offset increased emissions.
Third - Crisis of withdrawal can be avoided...
No less than 60% of the world's energy consumption would be wasted (appliances on standby, traffic jams, poorly insulated homes...). By limiting heat loss from buildings and increasing the performance and efficiency of appliances, we can then do better with less.
Fourth - Transition is good for employment
Fossil fuels do not create more jobs than renewable, and the energy transition will not put us all out of work. It is even the opposite: in the United States, solar energy already uses more than coal, and the gap is widening.
And finally - This is a public health issue
He is sometimes called the "invisible killer". Water, air and soil pollution caused by fossil extraction and burning is the leading cause of death in the world, killing three times more than HIV, malaria and tuberculosis combined.
In conclusion, dependence on oil, coal and gas has reached unprecedented levels, threatening the environment and the global economy. Yet alternatives exist and are now profitable.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-04-2018 17:50
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-04-2018 16:57
Bonjour,
Votre texte provient de toute évidence d'un traducteur en ligne, ce que nous ne corrigeons pas car votre travail n'a aucun intérêt.
Réponse : EOC/////Défendre idée de gerondif, postée le 22-04-2018 à 15:38:10
Bonjour,
j'ai retrouvé vos sources, et fait comme vous un résumé de cet article dont vous extrayez des phrases en les coupant des explications qui s'y rapportent:
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Produits de la décomposition de forêts et micro-organismes voilà des millions d’années, les combustibles fossiles ont dormi sous terre jusqu’à ce qu’Homo Sapiens se mette à les extraire à marche forcée à partir du milieu du XIXe siècle. Accros ou pas, il va falloir trouver notre bonheur ailleurs.
Voici dix raisons de laisser reposer le carbone en paix.(bon, cinq chez vous...)
1-Ça détraque le climat
Depuis 1880, la température du globe s’est élevée de 0,85°C en moyenne et 14 des 15 premières années du XXIe siècle sont les plus chaudes jamais enregistrées.Conséquence : un tiers de la glace arctique fond en été, les océans s’acidifient, sécheresses et ouragans se multiplient.
3-Agir coûte moins cher que ne rien faire
Pour chaque dollar non investi dans des technologies plus propres avant 2020, ce sont 4,30 dollars de plus qui devront être dépensés après 2020 pour compenser les émissions accrues.
4-On peut éviter la crise de manque…
Pas moins de 60% de la consommation mondiale d’énergie serait gaspillée (appareils en veille, bouchons sur la route, logements mal isolés, pertes dans la production et le transport d’électricité…). Limiter les pertes de chaleur des bâtiments, accroître la performance et le rendement des appareils permet par ailleurs de faire mieux avec moins.
6-La transition est bonne pour l’emploi
Non, les énergies fossiles ne créent pas plus d’emplois que les renouvelables, et la transition énergétique ne va pas tous nous mettre au chômage. C’est même le contraire : aux États-Unis, le solaire emploie déjà plus que le charbon, et le fossé se creuse.
10-C’est un enjeu de santé publique
On l’appelle parfois le «tueur invisible». La pollution de l’eau, de l’air et du sol provoquée par l’extraction et la combustion des fossiles est la première cause de mortalité dans le monde : elle tuerait trois fois plus que le VIH, le paludisme et la tuberculose réunis.
Votre conclusion est l'introduction de l'article:
La dépendance au pétrole, au charbon et au gaz a atteint des niveaux inégalés, menaçant l’environnement et l’économie mondiale. Pourtant, les alternatives existent et sont désormais rentables.
voici un essai google traduction
Products of the decomposition of forests and micro-organisms millions of years ago, fossil fuels slept underground until Homo Sapiens began extracting them from the mid-nineteenth century. Accros or not, we will have to find our happiness elsewhere.
Here are ten reasons to let the carbon rest in peace
1-It breaks the climate
Since 1880, the global temperature has risen by 0.85 ° C on average and 14 of the first 15 years of the twenty-first century are the hottest ever recorded.Consequency: one-third of the Arctic ice melts in summer, the oceans s Acidify, droughts and hurricanes multiply.
3-Acting is cheaper than doing nothing
For every dollar not invested in cleaner technologies before 2020, an additional $ 4.30 will have to be spent after 2020 to offset the increased emissions.
4-We can avoid the crisis of lack ...
No less than 60% of the world's energy consumption would be wasted (standby devices, traffic jams, poorly insulated housing, losses in the production and transmission of electricity, etc.). Limiting the heat loss of buildings, increasing the performance and performance of the devices can also do better with less.
6-The transition is good for the job
No, fossil fuels do not create more jobs than renewables, and the energy transition will not all put us out of work. The opposite is true: in the United States, solar energy already uses more than coal, and the gap is widening.
10-It's a public health issue
It is sometimes called the "invisible killer". Water, air and soil pollution caused by fossil extraction and burning is the leading cause of death in the world, killing three times as much as HIV, malaria and tuberculosis combined.
Dependence on oil, coal and gas has reached unprecedented levels, threatening the environment and the global economy. Yet alternatives exist and are now profitable.
