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Message de mareee posté le 25-11-2017 à 21:43:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger le texte-ci dessous, s'il vous plaît.
Merci d'avance.
Good afternoon Susan,
I am *** and I send you an email about persons who disappeared : your cousin, 1 English and 2 French whose one is my brother, on the January, 7th in ***.
I realised a splendid missing poster to help you so, please find enclosed this poster. Moreover, I received an anonimous letter, written with letters printed, which says :"Search the school library" ; maybe, persons hid clues in this library or maybe, these missing persons were hidden in this place, who knows ?
So, what do you think about that ? What would you like to do ? For my own part, I think that I will go into this place to check the possible presence of clues. I shall keep you informed when the time comes.
Yours sincerely,
***.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-11-2017 22:15
Message de mareee posté le 25-11-2017 à 21:43:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger le texte-ci dessous, s'il vous plaît.
Merci d'avance.
Good afternoon Susan,
I am *** and I send you an email about persons who disappeared : your cousin, 1 English and 2 French whose one is my brother, on the January, 7th in ***.
I realised a splendid missing poster to help you so, please find enclosed this poster. Moreover, I received an anonimous letter, written with letters printed, which says :"Search the school library" ; maybe, persons hid clues in this library or maybe, these missing persons were hidden in this place, who knows ?
So, what do you think about that ? What would you like to do ? For my own part, I think that I will go into this place to check the possible presence of clues. I shall keep you informed when the time comes.
Yours sincerely,
***.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-11-2017 22:15
Réponse : Correction/ email de laure95, postée le 27-11-2017 à 16:12:10 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Good afternoon Susan,
I am *** and I send you an email about persons (people est plus courant)who disappeared (mettre au present perfect): your cousin, 1 English and 2 French whose one is my brother, on the (pas de the) January, (pas de virgule)7th in ***.
I realised (pas le bon verbe)a splendid missing poster to help you so (enlever so), please find enclosed this poster. Moreover, I received an anonimous (orthographe)letter, written with letters printed (ordre des mots), which says (une lettre ne "dit pas" quelque chose, mais une personne) :"Search the school library" ; maybe, persons (people) hid (present perfect)clues in this library or maybe, these missing persons (people) were hidden in this (pas le bon mot au passe")place, who knows ?
So, what do you think about that ? What would you like to do ? For my own part, I think that I will go into (pas la bonne préposition)this place to check the possible presence of clues. I shall keep you informed when the time comes.
Yours sincerely,
***.
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